Wednesday, October 20, 2010

ashes


I hate how these neurons fire in my head
All this electricity that divides you and me
To leave or hold on?
All this electricity that brings us to this point
Unspoken yet felt
All this electricity that makes me glow
Do you ever wonder is it me shining or burning to ashes?

6 comments:

Eye-shuh said...

Aw, such an intense feeling in that. I liked it. Its very nice writing. :)

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

how just a little change in the flicker changes everything. Sigh.

lizzie said...

@eye shush

thankss :)

@raaji
yeahh agreed..

Ubaid said...

yehi bus ek doctor aur aam insaan ki zindagi mai fark hai... lol humein sparks ka pata nahi chalta :P

Ragpicker said...

thoughtful .. few lines but they are intense ! thanks for sharing.
Rags

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